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Post by FalconX on Nov 12, 2008 18:23:04 GMT -5
What I saw in you
Before I knew you I'd watch you Looking for an action that told me that I had even a fraction of a chance, to be with you But such actions, never proved true
A flick of your hair seemed to give you such flair yet despite your beauty you considered it your duty To be kind and willing to all the souls milling around you and your friends But that wasn't where it ends
What I saw in you Made you seem to good to be true All I ever knew Was that I wanted to be, with you
And so my life continued on and every dawn that I lay awake you seemed to take another piece of my heart and if I'd been smart I would have told you what was true And how you drew me towards you
Yet, it seemed I had been deemed unworthy of such a thing That would bring us together forever...
Author's note: Random and I spent hardly any time on it xD
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Post by Sunrise on Nov 12, 2008 18:29:16 GMT -5
You forgot an r on the 'your' in the 3rd stanza, second to last line (: Anyway, I liked it! I could never rhyme that many words together... great job <3
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Post by FalconX on Nov 13, 2008 10:29:46 GMT -5
Whoops, thanks Sunrise! ^^
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