Anakalia
Aroused Writer
And Yet She Keeps Trying...
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Post by Anakalia on Oct 25, 2008 15:59:55 GMT -5
Blessed be, the night you walk, in the dark, they choose to leave their mark, less you hope, disappear, hope the night covers you, stay in step, a fraction wrong, they will find you, needn't be the willing participant, they will harm you, lead the way, keep moving, don't be afraid, they wont harm you, just walk away, don't let them see, the moon your guide, bringing you straight to me, yet your unrealizing, I'm the one you should fear the most, delicate balance tipped so wrong, i am good, but your wrong, i am fear full, i might hurt you, my poky spines out again, i push away, but you have tough skin, i try to not let you in, no harm done then, you should run away, i try my best not to feel, I WANT YOU, to let you no, I'm unfair, my mouth a lone. a lethal tear, walk away, leave me now, i don't want to hurt you, so disappear, i don't have you yet, we never met, but just don't come, I'm a lethal threat.
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Post by T. Corpse on Oct 26, 2008 9:10:04 GMT -5
Oooh, I rather liked this one... I had to read it once or twice, and I definetly really like it. C: Especially the stanzas "a fraction wrong/they will find you/needn't be the willing participant".
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Anakalia
Aroused Writer
And Yet She Keeps Trying...
Posts: 283
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Post by Anakalia on Oct 26, 2008 14:24:11 GMT -5
Thank yo very much
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Post by Sunrise on Oct 26, 2008 15:30:54 GMT -5
It gives a very confusing message to me! Very dark, kinda scary... I like =)
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Anakalia
Aroused Writer
And Yet She Keeps Trying...
Posts: 283
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Post by Anakalia on Oct 27, 2008 11:14:46 GMT -5
Lol im glad you like it i no it can be kinda confusing i end up doing that a lot because i jump from subjest to subject fairly easy, but that is also for your benfit because if not u'd be here reading it for hours. i like to go into detail alot so i cut myself off. So either u'll get short confusing but good or long explained understanding and see how i just went into detail yeah thats what i try to prevent
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