Immortal

[Venom]

<sup>I know that this isn't really Great, but this is really all I have to offer.... It's just something I thought up. Mainly everything I write is about vampires.... sorry ^^;

Please comment, if you would like ^^

Only three simple things
can bring Immortal pleasure.

Skin
The sweet feel
soft and warm
The screams of terror
that so often comes

Blood
The sweet taste
Metallic, Iron
The sweet smell
heart pounding deep

Slow
bringing your lips
to the victim
Pressing your teeth
deep in skin
drowning your senses
filling your thirst</sup>[/i]

<sup>Here is another one that is way shorter...

Venom hits the heart
As the last
mortal word is spoken
"REVENEGE"</sup>

[Sunrise]

I like the first one <33 I'm not too much of a vampire fan, as a lot of people seem to be today (because of Twilight I think? never read it...), but I like these poems.